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Wishing to have the Last dance by ~ayasha21:iconayasha21:



His eyes so kind finds her
Hiding under tables
This little girl in a tea cup dress
Daddy wants to dance
Only with his princess

She moves in with him in distress
Embarrassed by these eyes that see
King and little Princess
Dance amongst the sea of words and melodies

This Princess now much mature
Eyes that show perfection
Work nurtured by Mother Nature
Takes her fathers hand again
To meet the floor
Let the harmony begin

Princess Oh Princess
What will you do?
When the hand that was once there is gone
Mighty Queen shows her face
Amongst the older crowd

With dignity and grace
She’ll take her place
Stand where here daddy stood
The subjects at her hand
The only thing on her mind
To be that little girl
In the tea cup dress
Finding his kind eyes
©2009 ~ayasha21
:iconayasha21:

Author's Comments

This is a different piece compared to my others.

In a way it has some personal references to me and my dad. I love him and I dedicate this to him. I thank God that he is around for me because I don't know what I would do with out him.

If you want to know more about this piece just note me and I would gladly like to tell you about them. This goes for any other piece of mine. Thank you for reading.

~Ayasha

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:iconentula:
oh my god, that's so absolutely sad...

i commend you on this one, it's so well written that im tearing up a little bit...

wow.. it's such a beautiful story, but it's really, really sad in the end.. but it's perfect.. like.. her memory of him will keep him alive with her.....
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atleast thats what i get from it.. something like that.. i can't really describe what i feel from it.. like sadness.. but joy at the same time..

it's beautiful

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time you enjoyed wasting.. wasn't wasted
:iconayasha21:
Thank you so much! I appreciate your comment and again I feel really flattered.

~Ayasha
:iconentula:
aww..^^ no worries:]

it's a fantastic poem.. really beautiful..

:]

<3

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time you enjoyed wasting.. wasn't wasted
:iconerilisvampyre:
*smile* Very beautiful. Reminds me of the touching moments with my Dad.

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~ That is not dead which can eternal lie
And with strange aeons even death may die. ~
:iconayasha21:
Thank you so much. :D

~Ayasha
:iconerilisvampyre:
Sure. You're welcome. :)

--
~ That is not dead which can eternal lie
And with strange aeons even death may die. ~

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